Bill it has become a while since I have had the pleasure of reading your poems .

With my hubby starting his own business at home my time on the internet is so limited to 15 minuts here, 15 there since I am on GRRR dial-up......and I must keep the phone lines open

But anyways I must say that this write is wowzers . I just had to keep seeing what was about to happen next . I went back to reread it over once more in case I had missed something in my hurried attempt to read the next lines .
I think it would make an awesome short story as well as a poem . And if I were a publisher I would publish it on my front page .But then again you know I have always been one of your biggest poetry fans.......Right....lol
Anyways I hope to catch up soon on the so many of your pieces that I have missed . Take care !

AHHHHHHAHAAHHAHHH GOOOOOOG :0)

Excellent. your poem was good. mysterious, had tension, and was twisted. well done!