Paper Tears

by Ashleigh Skye   Apr 22, 2006


Broken lines,
and scattered thoughts,
missing words,
my emotions in knots.

This pen's ink is splattered,
across the page,
my sweat and blood,
my tears and rage.

Creases of pain,
holes from my fear,
but the solid colour,
makes my true emotions unclear.

And when the emotion dries up,
when there's no heart behind the song,
the paper becomes crumpled,
in the garbage where it belongs.

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PLZ COMMENT AND VOTE I WOULD LOVE TO HEAR WHAT YOU THINK OF THIS ONE THANX A LOT

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    That was intense! I love it! You're an awesome writer, you have such a way with words. I plan to read much more of your poetry =)
    Thanks for your comment on my poem.
    Take Care,
    Sarah-Joy

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    You have such an amazing way with words. I am loving the last stanza, so unusual but still so effective at conveying your emotions.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    I liked ths one too,i read fr u sme poems..this one is nice and perfect..u deserve 5/5..

  • 18 years ago

    by Jin

    Great imagery. I loved your description through poetry in poetry. =) 5/5 Excellent!!!!

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