First, I think if you had some punctuation it would flow better. Maybe go more in detail about how you feel. People need to know that this kind of abuse and any kind is not right.

Your first two line stood out to me. I've been there and I'm afraid of being in that same place again. You can sense some pain in these words without it being told to you since pain goes deeper than ink or type could ever go.

This has a very powerful meaning. this was overal really good and got alot of emotion. good job. keep up the good writing.

-Hillo

Wow this is heartfelt that line with victimized what amazing. and i love:
Happiness wouldn't be stuck behind a huge brick wall.
I just want to go back in time,
And prevent all of this.
So then I can live happily,
Because these nightmares I would never miss.

amazing.

Aw, if that was true it makes it even sadder=( The way you wrote it was so...real. Great job.

Hi there confused.

I love your poetry. It takes so much courage to write and I am glad you can express yourself and post your poems on the net.

I would love to have some of your poetry on my website for other survivors to see at www.whitedovesnest.com. Please feel free to email me at whitedovesnest@hotmail.com

Thanks
Whitedove

Thats intense and a really great poem.You managed to write about a really dark topic and encompass all the elements without it seeming self-deprecating or too graphic. Excellent job

This is such an intense poem I am almost speechless. I feel you expressed yourself well and handled a difficult subject aptly.
Keep your chin up ad keep writing

I understand how you feel, not just because I can relate but because you express yourself so freely, something I couldn't do even if I tried. Love it, and I'm adding you to favourites. ^^