I was looking for the rain,
all along the day,
i saw some people that were gay
wierdly calling \"Daddeh\"
i went up to a guy
and said, hi!
i looked to the sky,
and then i started to cry,
the rain poured down
slowly....
then harder,
and hail,
and then... a miracle..
it was snow.
This poem would have been ok other than the lines:
i saw some people that were gay
wierdly calling "Daddeh"
Why is it that all ur poems have some reference sexual beings? it kinda ruins it