He doesnt

by Raychel   Apr 23, 2006


Listening to love songs,
i think about mine.
i know that its not ok,
i know thst we\'re not fine.

he doesnt make me feel good about myself,
And so many others do.
But for some reason i cant seem to bare to leave him,
Am i a fool?

He doesnt like me for me,
he likes me for my title as his girlfriend,
But it hrts me to think,
that it may have to end.

he doesnt know about the old cutting,
he doesnt know about my past pain,
he doesnt know about my tears,
that fall like a thunderstorm\'s rain.

he doesnt know

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    Amazing poem...i cant say that i\'ve felt this way personally, but I know others who have, and it sucks and hurts. just remember that eventually, it\'ll get better, this ***hole will leave you alone, and you\'ll get over him.

    he doesnt know about the old cutting,
    he doesnt know about my past pain,
    he doesnt know about my tears,
    that fall like a thunderstorm\'s rain.

    great stanza right there ;-). really good rhyming, and it was so filled with emotion. 5/5 from me. keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    The spelling wasnt top notch but the poem was very well written. i kno its hard, im srry that it isnt working out and that i was right. keep up the good work,
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by ImTheGirl

    I love it. i saw the title i knes it would be good

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