I love it. i saw the title i knes it would be good

The spelling wasnt top notch but the poem was very well written. i kno its hard, im srry that it isnt working out and that i was right. keep up the good work,
love ya lots,
sore

Amazing poem...i cant say that i\'ve felt this way personally, but I know others who have, and it sucks and hurts. just remember that eventually, it\'ll get better, this ***hole will leave you alone, and you\'ll get over him.

he doesnt know about the old cutting,
he doesnt know about my past pain,
he doesnt know about my tears,
that fall like a thunderstorm\'s rain.

great stanza right there ;-). really good rhyming, and it was so filled with emotion. 5/5 from me. keep it up