Suddenly everything has changed (collab)

I like this piece very much, and I dislike typical love poetry but this piece is very interesting and original.
It posses some sweet tone and you expressed emotions on a excellent way, incredible collab.
I truly enjoyed in every line, bravo.

I liked this poem, it detailed both sides, and it flowed really nicely ^_^.

I think my favorite line might be:
Unsure if I want to take that chance
But I'm willing to compromise
Now come along with me
To find that place for which I strive

like an unsure gesture. Ehh idk ^_^

I am an idiot. I didn't even see that the poem was by two people.

Haha, shows how much I pay attention.

Wow, for a collaboration poem,
even more incredible.

7/5

The first three lines of the first verse are okay, but then this comes:
"Like a natural ace" and I am sorry, but I cannot read that and not think 'corny'. I know I have to read on, but I just wanted to say that it's best not to rhyme at all if the rhyme you have in mind makes the whole poem corny. Now to read on...

"Unsure if I want to take that chance but I'm willing to compromise" ~ I read that line and fell in love with it. It is so short, so simple, and yet directly to the point. Wonderful job!

reading on....

"To find that place for which I strive" sorry, just wanted to say that although when this line stands alone, now that I can see it alone, it looks horridly corny when rhymed. Sorry, just wanted to say that =]

reading on...

"A leap of faith we will take
Together hand in hand
Exploring the path of destiny
To see what fate has planned" ~honestly, I love love love this verse. It is cute, it is sweet, it is short and honest, and I thought a moment and for the sake of the flow I think it would be pretty if it looked like this:

"A leap of faith we both shall take
Together hand in hand
to explore our destiny
and see what fate has planned"
~I think in the revised verse, the flow is much better and easier to comprehend =]
I'm not saying it's a need, just an option.

All I can say is wow.
Wow wow wow.

This poem is wonderful.
The last two verses are awesome, and it is just a pretty amazing poem now that I read it fully through. I read the last line and said wow in my head, and I love the last line especially.

Wonderful job.
All your errors led up to the end, and the end was incredible.

6/5
~Stephen White

Wow, it's good to see you are continuing doing collabs cuz you're good at them. I loved these stanzas:
A leap of faith we will take
Together hand in hand
Exploring the path of destiny
To see what fate has planned

Everything seems to be just right
Taking this train ride
To find out were we stand
In this thing we call love

beautifully written poem.
take care,
marjan