So charmingly polite.....how could he/or/she (one never knows...) refuse???????
"Opening up my wounds with pain"??...
This really is toooo complex for me...good, though.

I can still feel you lips
As if I'm kissing you again
Reliving every moment
Opening up my wounds with pain

i loved this bit. but the whole poem was amazing. :) keep it up. 5/5

nami

Ooo sexy

I like this poem, so cool beautiful

i also like your name too on this website too lol

Elisha