Wow, the pain is strongly evident all throughout this poem. Another emotional piece, and another well written poem. Good Job!

Yours Sincerely

Andrew Brian Kirkman

Really good poem!! 5/5

Hay hunni, I have missed your poems...and I am so sorry to read that you are in so much pain. I really felt your pain and frustrations in the poem, broke my heart!! I can relate in so many ways...I am always here for you, don't you forget.

All of my love - Sabrina

This is horrible! Not the poem...the experience. I would pretty much die of fear. It's so frightening, but it's an amazing poem. Excellent write!