Written With A Lover's Hand

by Kaylee   Apr 23, 2006


Mountains gathering, bracing wind,
regret we deteriorate beneath.
River cutting through damaged
essence, our drowning honest love.

Forbidden romance, we held,
dissolving within whispers.
Heart forever beating...beating...
thudding blood rushes my ears.

Breathing your aroma, sweet
bouquet flowers seasonal for eternity.
Washing lies from flesh touched
with hands, cleansing struggling sins.

Road where wheels turn, sunsetting
on hidden world where we reside.
Turning...turning...direction where
your mind, my heart, may lay.

Everything we had burned on
pages written with a lover’s hand.

I wish I knew how to forget you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This poem is really good. I don't even know how to describe it. It was all so perfect. I especially love the way that you ended it. Great job! You described everything so well & you did a really good job on this! 5/5**

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Mostly your use of diction was good and gave depth to your words. However, in places it caused me to stumble over your words instead.
    The fourth stanza was my favourite because it captured a touching image and it flowed off my tongue too.
    Good strong ending, the final line gave an emotional conclusion.
    Well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Woww.. dat wuz amazing! keep up the excellent work! :))
    jessy

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥ Always With You

    I love it! It's so meaningful. I love the way it was a short poem, but it said ALOT! I love it! Great job and keep up the good work. Read mine... It's not done, but I think it will be a great start... Suggestions would be nice..

  • 18 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Beautiful write... I'm really at a loss for words right now.
    5/5
    As always~ Kate

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