by katie! Apr 23, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
A million special pieces go missing from my heart |
by sirius
Great poem, written in such a brilliant way with a real atmosphere about it. |
by Kaylee
An enchanting poem but if I could make one suggestion, that one line in the final stanza threw me off because it was the longest one and the word water was on a line on it's own maybe you can try this if you wanted: |
by HOLLY ARMER
"Missing pieces from that twinkle, that lay there in your eye |
Congratulations on winning the Tempting Titles 2 Challenge for this title! |