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What a spectacular story!

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"Missing pieces from that twinkle, that lay there in your eye
Which faltered then disapeared as time passed us by"

I love those lines, so enchanting. The entire piece is beautiful, but those lines...just wow.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

An enchanting poem but if I could make one suggestion, that one line in the final stanza threw me off because it was the longest one and the word water was on a line on it's own maybe you can try this if you wanted:
As I wander down the shoreline, throwing stones into the water
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As I wander down the shoreline,
throwing stones into water.

Great poem, written in such a brilliant way with a real atmosphere about it.

5/5