This is a beautiful poem... i could never write anything as deep as this... i also like tile floor

This is an intriguing poem, Jordan. Inspiring, full of sorrow but courage; a poem overflowing with wondrous detail and emotion. Written atmospherically and beautifully. Well done.

Much love and God bless,
Fallen.

P.S: Do take the time out to read my poems. Please and thank you =).