by Yazdan Apr 23, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
As long as my heart beats |
by nikki
Awwww! wow this is really good! one of my favorites! |
Hey Yaz, |
by Spirit
Your poems are so inspiring i wish i was that good. |
by Rachel RTVW
Nice sentiment but you used pain and variations of the word too much. |
by Courtney
I thought this poem was very cute and sweet. Though your ryhmes weren't the best, the meaning really picked up the slack for it. I enjoyed reading your poem very much. |