Wow that took me awhile to read,
thts a long bootay poem u got there
but this poem was Great
Your rhymes was excellent
you flow was great
Your message was put out
Couldnt say anything less about it
your doing great
and your poetry is magic
keep it up
5/5
~TPOMH~

Hay that was really good gurl

I love your technique, it's strong and flows nicely. though i've never been too good at love poems, yours are spectacular! thanx for the fave.
5/5