OMG I love those books, and this was a nice poem for it!!! I was intrugied from the start by the title but I didn't expect it to be from one of my fav series. whee!
-Kim

Wow, very sad and straightforward. It tells everything how it is and the meaning is easy to find. Capitalization would be good, but I don't really mind it's just a bit distracting. I love the story it tells though, although I've never read the book. I love it! 5/5.

Thats another nice dark poem! leaves me speachless 5/5

Very well done, the rhyme works very well, and it flows quite well to.
dark poetry as it perhaps should be :)
well done, keep it up :)

I enjoyed this, I found it to be sad and straight to the point.
Excellent rhyming and flow.

Wow this is really good! i loved the story line and the flow was perfect! 5/5

The key i gave you to my heart
she took it from you and tore it apart
now you're gone and she has you
i only wish she'd killed me too

this was the paragraph that i loved most. it doesn't matter if i came from a book. it shows that you are a great chooser of a certain text.

5/5 David