Comments : I'm Falling

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    This would of "looked" better if you made it in a Stanza of Four.. instead of a Couplet..This poem was really nice
    and it was Original and Classic
    Great job
    5/5
    ~TPOMH~

  • 18 years ago

    by AnAstAciA

    I've been in similar situation...but i never had the chanse, that i was sorry....:( Oh...well....Your poem is very truthful... and comes from the heart!!!!Well done keep it up...:) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Aww this is sweet, its nice to write a poem to apologise for sumthing.