Day 1-Forever

by myshiningstar14   Apr 23, 2006


Day 1- I can't stop crying and slowly I am dying. Barely hanging on, is this almost over, no it's just begun.

Day 2- The tear stains on my shirt build, and as it fills my mind I lye crying and dying; hating myself for ruining this opportunity for us.

Day 3- My mind so confined, and my heart so crushed, MY thoughts so numb. When will the day come when this is all over?

Day 4- The pain that this brings, my heart and my body aches. I've had enough. But I'll never give up.

Day 5- My memory doesn't fade, still the memories of this lose become even more real.

Day 6- Nothing matters anymore, thats for sure. I break out in random tears, and I am unable to let go of this fear.

Day 7- I can't gather my thoughts, and I am caught in this numbness that never ceases. I have you to hold, and I have my Lord to love and that's all I need.

Day 8 till forever- The days start all over again, 1,2,3,4,,5,6,7..the process always more drastic than the first. This has become my day 1-forever.

Lissa

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  • 18 years ago

    by stargirl49

    Awwwwwww, lissa!!!!!!! was this written during that time when i was helping you keep smiling? when you and johnny were at odds? awwww, girl, i remember that! i'm glad i know that you're happy now. (even tho you traded us pennsylvanians in for ppl from utah!)
    i luv you!!!
    ~maggie

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    I really like your creative structure the day thing .. your an amazing writer ..
    the poem was really emotional and sad .. but really great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    This poem is truly Sad
    and truley amazing
    Great job
    I might actually Write a poem like this
    You mind if i do that little Day thing like you did..
    i wont do it if you dont want me to
    Great job again
    5/5
    ~TPOMH~

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