This poem is truly Sad
and truley amazing
Great job
I might actually Write a poem like this
You mind if i do that little Day thing like you did..
i wont do it if you dont want me to
Great job again
5/5
~TPOMH~

I really like your creative structure the day thing .. your an amazing writer ..
the poem was really emotional and sad .. but really great poem.

Awwwwwww, lissa!!!!!!! was this written during that time when i was helping you keep smiling? when you and johnny were at odds? awwww, girl, i remember that! i'm glad i know that you're happy now. (even tho you traded us pennsylvanians in for ppl from utah!)
i luv you!!!
~maggie