Wow I love it!! whoot whoot first comment! I know the way that feels! I'm sooo sorry that things aren't working out for you...I'm here if ya want to talk...
with luv amanda

Excellent work. u always kno how 2 put ur words, expressions and emotions 2gether and it's jus excellent. i totally love this, beyond words cud explain! 5/5

Great poem. I loved it. Can totally relate to how you feel. You always write the best poems. Loved it. Keep it up :)

Ouch, but i do know wt u mean but once again ur poems are bout her but ur with another, i think well u no wt i think. anyway im here if u ever need i dunno anything i suppose. god i hope ur happy now im crying all these sad poems not what i need at the mo, oh well take care great hertfelt poem, i loved it and felt it with all of my soul and i suppose i always will.

This Is Once Again A Great Poem...I Just Luv Your Poems... This Time I'm Speachless...Your Poem Is So Fantastic That I'm Speachless...And It Is So Rare For Me To Not Have Sumthin To Say....
Keep Up The Great Work
Take Care....
Luv,
The Bell....

WOW I felt this sooo much. This rly is one awesomly powerful piece..way to capture this feeling...WOW EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT! :)Keep it up buddy.

Lissa

But all you really did
was put my heart in the blender~

I really like these two lines because its so graphic and shows the depth of your hurt- I can so relate- i've been there but it seems we all have to go through heartache b4 we really find true love- great job. Take care XxX

Holy crap that is good that definintly reminds me off me and my ex girlfriend.
Great freaking job

Omg!! great job, david!!! i love it!!! you're an awesome writer. keep up the good work, and check out some of my new poems!!:)