Please baby please forgive me

Good job, sexy!!

Aw the emotion your words give out and every time you said you were sorry was an intense apology that couldnt be ignored. the only thing i can say about the poem is where the line cuts off to make another line it was a little wierd bcuz it was like a pause in your sentance. well i dunno if that made sence but yea lol

Not your best, but the fact that it isnt your best is covered up by the fact that its so filled with love, emotion, and apology...you're skilled at putting emotion into rhymes and lines...(haha that rhymed and i didnt even mean it to...)just remember Lissa that if love is true, nothing can break it, no matter what. just keep trying...excellent job, keep up the great poems

Wow you can tell your emotion was put through this
by your words of just saying please forgive me..
great job
I loved it so much
and your dedication is touching
great job
5/5
~TPOMH~