I really like this poem, it's really pretty, and explains what your feeling very well. Good job. 5/5. Thanks for commenting on my poem too. =D

Although the gist of il give you my stone heart does sound like more of a love poem :P i liked it all the same

you have the vocab to be able to make your lines long and complex without ruining the flow :D

thanks for the comment :]
and yeah the last stanza is abit weak..

but by then it was around 4am and i was rather tired

and everything cant always be worth 5/5 :P

and yeah i do hope to be more mature than most people my age..
plus i read way too much :] ...that i barely sleep :P