Our love

by rar   Apr 23, 2006


I loved you from the very start,

with everything that i had,

i gave you my heart,

and made you part of me.

your the one who made me happy,

who left footprints in my heart,

your the one i cant forget,

your the one who ill always treasure.

your heartbeat was the rhythm that i can fall asleep to,

our love was so strong,

it seemed unbreakable,

because of all the fights we had got through.

i thought our love was stronger,

because everything had felt so right,

especially all the phone calls made during the night,

made things even better.

when im alone,

i replay everything in my head again,

all the tears that i have shed for you,

you have shed none for me.

you really mean everything to me,

which is why i would show you my scars,

to see if you understand,

how much you mean to me.

i thought u had helped me reach my dreams,

just like when i layed looking at the sky with you,

everything had felt so right,

because we have made it longer than i had thought we would.

i cant say that i dont miss you,

because of the scars on my body,

they only get redder,

as my heart begins to race.

i cant seem to get over you,

to let go of what we had,

i cant seem to forget you,

because your the best i ever had.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kara

    Awwww...i really liked this one too....your writing style isnt very organized or structured but i kinda like it like that .... i like the way that you write...i can tell that what you say is coming straight from you and you mean what you say...i like that... i have been in the situation as this poem is referring to and it is so hard to love someone who doesnt care as much about you as you do about them and this poem reveal those feeling very well

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashlee

    This was so nice is relates to excactly how i feel...it was amazing!! i loved it...

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammi

    This is very good I feel the hurt and love in this poem and I have been in these shoes great work 5/5