Don't live in the past, there is nothing there for you now.

Very nice poem. I like the way it is written, it had a different flow to it. The beginning stanza is a little bit week, however the poem picks up nicely, and has a strong ending.

Kalika

I normally do not like reading poems in this format, but this one did keep my attention. Maybe you should have more punctuation then that last question mark though as it reads like one long sentence.
I really think the title was strong as it seemed more like pleading which ties in well with the poem theme.
What do you mean, though, but if I don't touch. I think that's the only part I didn't get but good luck writing. I wish you the best.

You are an excellent writer
you convey message and purpose in your poems.
well done 5/5
xxoxx
mary

Aww, beautiful. and sad and so well written i read it again 3 times over. Most of it flows so smoothly. I really liked it. good job.

Simply beautiful poem, flowed with beautiful penned, awesome....keep them coming, have a good day!

thanks for your nice comment, much appreciated. take care.

I think there is puntuation needed in places and some parts didnt make sense. The title was a wow factor and the start a slight let down. But it picked up nicely towards the end. I love the colourful language you use has a kind of fantastical feel to it. Nice stuff...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Its just so strange the way your past can hit you at anytime :(

great poem