by ShadowDancer Apr 24, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
In the wind the trees rustling |
I did it i commented on every single one, phhhwww took a while but i did it :) |
You deserve a much higher rating Rubz |
by Sole
Very depressing poem - You've used some great techniques, and the rhyming really fits just into place, except the slight stumble in the first verse. Overall, nicely written, deep and complex if you look beyond the outer lines, but it flows well and makes a gripping read. |
Ahh yes. i read this on Matt's Competetion. very very good. You shoudl be very happy and proud of this poem, improv isn't as easy as it seems. a good poem made from a good title : ) |