Please know i love you

by BlueDreams   Apr 24, 2006


How i wish I could take
Those thoughts of insecurity away
How i wish I could show you
I mean what I'll say

How i wish you would realize
My love for you is true,
I also hope you know
it is only for you.

I've told you time after time
I'll want to be with you for my life,
I sit here and pray someday
You are become my wife.

I'll love you forever,
However long that take maybe,
I would go to the limits
Of the world just to make you see.

I hope one day we can be
Happy and live in bliss,
I hope someday I can ease
Your fears with just one kiss.

I know the situation
We are in is very hard,
But all these hate full words
Are leaving me emotionally scared.

You can write me
A letters so dear,
You put in there loving words
That I've wanted to hear.

Sometimes you say some
Really mean things,
But that doesn't stop
the love my heart brings.

I don't know what else
I should say to you,
Except these insecure thoughts
you're having are untrue.

Also please know i love you
And miss you being near,
And all the love I have for you
is still waiting here.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I thought this poem was very beautiful and sincere.. I completely agree with whatever you had to say on this peice.. I like how you never used any extravagant words, it made it so simple and so sweet which was way mroe romantic than something made to look or hear romantic.. it was straight from the heart and sometimes the simple words are the best said.. hehe I loved this poem.. I hope you do find that woman!!!
    God Bless,
    Sarah-Joy

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0ohhh very heartfelt darl. i like ur way 0f writing. fr0m the heart, g0od j0b 0n this..

    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Good write, filled with so much emotion and very soulful. Well done.

    Best regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by Catherine

    OMG! IT WAS AMAZING! But, if you don't mind getting advice from a 12 y/o, it seem like some of the parapgraphs are out of sink, or they don't really match. For example, the line:

    I hope someday I can ease
    Your fears with just one kiss.

    It seems like there should be a discribing word like Tiney, or amazing after one and before kiss, justa tip.
    Also, please read my poem Living Love, I want everyones opinion

  • 18 years ago

    by renee Turner

    This is really sweet not to be to nossy but what did you do??? And whatever you did i hope you let ya girl read this poem

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