Letter Too Mom

by A thousand broken hearts carried by a thousand broken wings   Apr 24, 2006


My mommy FOUND me
In my room on my FLOOR
Before I did this
I put my DONT DISTURB sign on my door
But now she LOOKS at me
With blood FLOWING from my wrist
She picks up a note
THAT READS SOMETHING LIKE THIS
~ Mom
I know I NEVER told you
NEVER showed it on my face
But I'll TELL YOU now
MY life was a DISGRACE
I never PLANNED a future
Because I knew my life would END
And now as I WRITE this
YOU were my only FRIEND
I NEVER MEANT too hurt you
I NEVER MEANT too break your heart
Just keep on LIVING
And WE'LL NEVER be apart
Tell DADDY that I love him
Tell SIS and BROTHER too be brave
And PROMISE me this on my birthday
Every year put a rose on my GRAVE
I LOVE you mommy very much
And when the others cry
Tell them I HATED them all
Each CUT will tell them why
I must go now MOMMY
DEATH is calling MY name
And when YOU see me DEAD mom
Don't put on YOURSELF the blame
I'm PICKING up the KNIFE now mommy
These TEARS for you I cry
I just made the FIRST CUT mom
I guess now I'LL say GOODBYE

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    A really powerful piece! You're a great writer 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ippy

    OH MY GOODNESS....Hunny you poor thing! This poem was amazing, it made me feel for you with all my heart. This is the first poem on this site that I've read, that made me so extremely sad...Please know hun that you will never know if life is worth living, if you don't continue living it...great poem, keep up the good work and YOU WILL PROSPER!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this alot, it reminded me so much of when my mother first found I was cutting.
    I loved the imagery, the wording, the flow. Everything about it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Aaron Foster

    I really like it ur could go all the way if u put ur mind into it

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Very sad poem. I think we all feel down at some point in our lives.
    Just remember there are always those that care about you and that in itself is worth living for!
    I also wrote a poem to my mom called Mother check it out and let me know what ya think!

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