That is such a sad strong poem, I think it in itself inspired me 2 do something about my life And I think if u r so talented you make people smile then u must know u have such amazing talent and its amazing. I wish I was half the writer you are because it so beautiful.

xox love stained sheetz

Oh....My...GoD!! That is so very very very sad!! It's so intense i absolutely love your flow adn technique. sara, this poem is amazing. i wasn't really expecting ANYTHING of this standard, not becuase of you or anything, but because i havn't read a poem that made me so very sad on this site in sooooo long. amazing work!
-Suzie J

Very sad poem. I think we all feel down at some point in our lives.
Just remember there are always those that care about you and that in itself is worth living for!
I also wrote a poem to my mom called Mother check it out and let me know what ya think!

I really like it ur could go all the way if u put ur mind into it

I liked this alot, it reminded me so much of when my mother first found I was cutting.
I loved the imagery, the wording, the flow. Everything about it.

OH MY GOODNESS....Hunny you poor thing! This poem was amazing, it made me feel for you with all my heart. This is the first poem on this site that I've read, that made me so extremely sad...Please know hun that you will never know if life is worth living, if you don't continue living it...great poem, keep up the good work and YOU WILL PROSPER!

A really powerful piece! You're a great writer 5/5