The Burning Pain In My Heart

by LossxOfxControl   Apr 24, 2006


There’s a burning pain deep inside me
I think it’s at the core of my heart
I need some ice to put out the fire
Or I’m sure I’ll burn out with the ashes I’ll fall apart.

I knew this one guy,
He’s the one that lit it there
Then he left me on fire
I really thought he did care.

He told me he loved me, got his heart racing
But know I know it was just some lie
It doesn’t stop it from hurting though…
I don’t remember him ever even saying goodbye.

I’m still burning for him
My heart is still his for keeps
But I want that to change fast
Before the fire starts to sweep.

It’ll wipe out my whole body
That’s how much it’s already burning
I still really love him
For his touch my body is yearning.

But I know now he is really gone
And he’s never gonna’ come back
By the time the pain is gone
The ashes of heart will be black.

I’m trying so hard to keep it all together
Not to give in; not to fall apart
I never realized how much I loved him
Until he left this burning pain deep in my heart.

There’s a burning pain deep inside me
I think it’s at the core of my heart
I need some ice to put out the fire
Or I’m sure I’ll burn out with the ashes I’ll fall apart.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    Good metaphor. I enjoyed this poem, it was one of the ones that you just don't want to stop reading. The only mistake I found was:

    "But know I know it was just some lie"

    Simple spelling mistake "know", it can easily be fixed. Great job.