by PS Apr 24, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
The ground shakes beneath the feet |
Beautifully written. Really nice take on the subject, reads nicely.. good work! |
Wow...excellent. words can't describe how touching this poem is. i especially liked this part. |
Nicely done..watch out for puntuation in areas but a very simplistic rhyme which works well. |
by Melissa
Beautifully done, I love the flow to this poem... Your words are sincere and heartfelt, nice work! :) |
by Laura
Strong message from the beginning to end. Yiu have beautifully described how I felt when I was finishing school. |