WOW... sad yet soo true... i can really relate to that... this is truly the end yet it's considered a beginning also.. |
by Laura
Strong message from the beginning to end. Yiu have beautifully described how I felt when I was finishing school. |
by Melissa
Beautifully done, I love the flow to this poem... Your words are sincere and heartfelt, nice work! :) |
Nicely done..watch out for puntuation in areas but a very simplistic rhyme which works well. |
Wow...excellent. words can't describe how touching this poem is. i especially liked this part. |
Beautifully written. Really nice take on the subject, reads nicely.. good work! |