Comments : Fairytales and Princesses

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I remember all these stories and they are lovely. You have such vivid imagery as when you mention a fairytale, it takes us back to them. I would suggest changing these because with both when and if in the same sentence, it doens't make much sense:
    "when if fall"
    plus, you never know you might just find your fairytale ending.

  • 18 years ago

    by 2 Be FoReVr AlOnE

    I LOVE this poem, you know your way with words. Keep it up!