Wow SiE this is an amazing poem, I love the style you used to write it, every stanza was amazing and you really brought out some raw feelings and emotions...

I LOVED this stanza

"Come back to me my swooping dove
Fly down to me from high above
I long to see a life filled of
Eternal love, Eternal love"

Wonderful write, be very proud of it!

I think you did a beautiful job, expecially with the words you chose for the repetition.

Amazing. I reallylike tis type of poetry style. This was such a beautiful write!

This is one of my favourite poems ever! The absolute beauty of this was maginfied by the form, such excellent penmenship. I was completely wrapped up in it from first word to last. An outstanding piece of poetry if I've ever seen one!

Simon,

TYou did such an excellent job of filling your words and emotion into the Monotetra form. Wonderfully written, kudos!

Best regards,

Steve

I really liked this poem. It was a beautiful write. I loved the line about the swooping dove. So glad that you could share that with us....(btw-you're on my favorites, :)! Keep it up!
~Jules