Following My Disgrace

by Sarah Ann   Apr 24, 2006


Somewhere in this world I see
A lost girl staring back at me
But I still cannot understand
The girl stays gripping on my hand

Her footsteps print right into mine
Now both of them had lost their shine
And somewhere in my heart I feel
I'm scared to know; to think it's real

She can't be walking in my place
My soul is shamed, I live disgrace
I'm half of empty: none of whole
And I can't seem to help her soul

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  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Excellent
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Great job! Just one thing, the last line, it could be "And I can't seem to help her soul" Not too important, just the rhyme.

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Well it was great with the rhyme scheme. Not really sure I liked this piece yet it had great flow and a cool word choice. Overall good job.
    ~Faith

  • 18 years ago

    by .+.unpretty_loser.+.

    I know the feeling, very well written, beautiful work. 5/5
    keep the great poems coming.
    love jessie.
    p.s. if you have any time, can you please check out some of mine?

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