Great poem!! keep on writing...
Tiffany Heather

Hey i like that poem comment mine..

X()X Devon

Nice poem very emotional and tells a lot about ur life keep it up with more poems:] comment my poems too!!

This is a brilliant poem. my favourite verse is At times I feel like I'm losing control,
It's like I'm dreaming never to wake again,
Then I see an unwavering light,
I'm now revived and ready to take flight,
it is really good writing. I'd like to see more of your work soon.
imi

I loved the poem. It told me a lot. Keep on writing.

XxXNothing-Gold-Can-StayXxX

Wow great poem..alot of emotion 5/5 keep up the good work

I loved the last stanza. so true!

marjan

Great 5/5 its even great that it happen to u i feel 4 u

much love

tiff

plz check out my poems thankz

I really like the expressions and words you used to fit the feeling. You are a great poet keep it up, some advice man. Let the Poetry breathe and let the words flow. But over all man that is fabulous, keep it up.

I know how u feel bro =) good poem, rally honest u'know...
Damion

I love this like every1 else by the looks of it lol love claire xxx

This is a good poem. Keep up the godo work 5/5
xoxoxoxox
Jess