It was fairly long, but worth the read. It defintely touched my heart. The rhyming was good and not too forced, which I really like. It was like reading a story, me standing their as a witness, and I could just feel the emotions from the poem jumping out at me. You did great. You have talent!

Holy cow sierra. That was INCREDIBLE, like, the BEST poem i have EVER read in my LIFE. It put tears in my eyes, like proper tears! I need to go and cry now!! lol wow sisi seriously tht was bloody amazing, your friend is so lucky to have a girl like you to take care of her, and i really wish her all the best. *Hug* I really love you sierra, and this poem is exactly what i love about you. The inspiratin you give me through writing, the massive love u have of writing such amazing poem, and through ALL your writing, a sense of hope and perseverance shines through so strongly, and i love you and admire you for being able to write such a beautiful peice of writing and still give hope to every single person who reads it.
I love u so much
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

*inspiration
**amazing poems

Oh wow sierra. that was absolutley amazing. it made me cry. great poem as usual. i love you so much si!!!!

That is so sad...i could never imagine going through this but you described it so well...great work here!

5/5

Wow, this is nothing short of an amazing poem. The feeling you portray has such depth and meaning. You are a truly beautiful writer and this is a work of art. Such a touching dedication at the end. Well done, seriously, I know it doesn't mean much, but well done.
Greta xo

OMG this is so great i love it

Its amazing 1 of my friends has leukemia i couldn't believe it wen they told me he's still 1 of my friends but the poem was amazing i loved it :]

This poem brought tears in my eyes. And I too do have an incurable disease but fighting is the only way to live your life I pray everything goes well.

This is an amazing poem!!!
It brought tears to my eyes and a pain in my heart, but this is an awesome poem!
-Jazmin

Did your friend die?
T_T I lost a grandmother to that same cancer...
I remember going to the hospital to see her... it was terrible... I talked to her a week before she died and she couldn't remember me..
I'd say it is a horrible thing to go threw. I wouldn't know but... from the looks of it .. I'm sure it is.
I'm sorry for your loss... you wrote that very well... It was a very touching poem! 5/5

Beautiful! it really touched me. and it also hit home for me too because my uncle is fighting lukemia right now. But he is doing well as far as things considered. I am sorry for your loss.

-Forgive me
I am also sorry for the loss of your grandma