Dude I hate this...how I copy/paste it from notepad, and then when I go to post it, it puts in the slashes...it bugs the hell out of me.

Ok, this was not a very inspirin poem, you are very talented but try and be more emotional when writin these poems, let them relate to yourself and just lose yourself when writing them but this was pretty pleasing

I think this is a good one. :) I lvoe the 2 line rhyme thats hard than a 3 lined stanza i think...keep it up buddy. I am grounded but my problem is solved I wasnt able ot goto my babys prom btu now i am:) so i will talk to you in liek 3 weeks. ....I am at skool now so yeah. I might post if i find time. Latas buddy.

Lissa

I think this is a good one. :) I lvoe the 2 line rhyme thats hard than a 3 lined stanza i think...keep it up buddy. I am grounded but my problem is solved I wasnt able ot goto my babys prom btu now i am:) so i will talk to you in liek 3 weeks. ....I am at skool now so yeah. I might post if i find time. Latas buddy.

Lissa