Not bad....words were amazing and well...different from what was expected. The last stanza wasn't really as good as the others though it did seem to tie in well. Word choice created an intricate weave through the stanzas.
~Faith

OMGGGG !!! this poem was bueitiful you are a true poet u have talent !! do u think u could write me a poem and send it to my e-mail me and my bestfriend just started going out we were freinds for 2 years and we are taking the chance and i want to write him a poem so do u think u could write it u have such talent if so my e - mail is mun_chi_chi_88_4_lyfe@YAHOO.COM

Wow this poem is really powerful. the way you left the poem to be interpreted by the reader was absolutely amazing. this poem is ingenius. keep writing with such freedom. also the language you used was overpowering with elegance and beauty. its a pity people dont write or speak like that anymore.

"Sinful thus delicious embrace"
Wow.
Ok, it reminded me of intercourse,yet also of death. Especially the last line. The wine metaphor was stunning, it left a bitter taste in my mouth.
Welcome back.
I was wondering when you'd post again.

Hey, are the brackets in this poem in the vein of sylvia plath's a mad girl's lovesong? anyways this is some pretty good shit, tiffy, keep it up. youre a darling!

All I can say is wicked. Keep it up. I like the Twisted side of things so this tickled my taste for deep and dark.

TRU

Wonderful wording and descriptions.
Good write!
5/5

I cant even begin to describe how incredibly beautiful this piece is. Though you didnt put any hidden meanings in it, it seems like you are trying to tell the world something. Gorgeous work.

Beautiful true poetry
The intricate wording really sets a different tone over the whole poem and it flows unnaturally well =)
I interupted, probably, in a completely different way than most but i enjoyed immensly (sp?)
5/5
*Gem*