Wow great poem! It was very well penned and written with much depth, so that I could feel every single word. I can totally understand where you were coming from with this one, and since I see this is one of your first few poems on the site, I would like to say you are very talented and I love your style already. Thank you so much for your comment on my poem, it was very much appreciated. I will most definately come back and read some more. Keep writing! 5/5

....wow... amazing!! you're very talented. welcome to the site, and to the club!! hope you enjoy!
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Hey that was a pretty cool poem. I really enjoyed it. again welcome 2 the club! :D

People tell me not to
But I cannot help but think
I could leave this life behind
And be gone in a blink

great stanza right there...and it is a great poem too. i bet many people can identify with it on so many levels...great read. keep up the great work

The image reflected in your eyes
Is it a revelation of my own?

That was such a good line! Even though you are new here, I can tell you're going to do very well. Good job(=

People tell me not to
But I cannot help but think
I could leave this life behind
And be gone in a blink

hunn dont give up on life.* Not the way to go. I love the poem though. It shows a lot of pain and emotion. Great structure and flow also.

I loved this poem... it was really good... great write 5/5

Beautiful poem! i could tell you put alot into it, it was good. It was sad, but i could relate to a bit, and btw...I agree with xXConfusedXx.