The poems is really short but really good!

I really liked the poem alot! it is really good! 5/5 from me

Good flow and rhythum to this peice, the structure is very effective and the content well expressed.

5/5

Aww Rach =[ This is sad. Very good though. I can relate alot. Keep it up my number one AA meeting buddie =] Taha.

Love you miss you

`taleee xx

It has a great deal of clearity.... i like it... and don't ever feel like you have to be perfect for anyone.... your as perfect in your eyes as you are in others.... don't let others interfere.... keep it up!!! i love your poems....

Definantily not perfect,
Brandi Dumencic AKA *Deadlilys*

Very good poem. It's very important that you captivate the reader from the start, and you did just that.
The message is also great, because thousands of people go through that everyday. Where everything is not what it seems.

I'm going to look out for your poetry from now on. Write more like these.. but do write some happy ones. :)

Undead

Wow i know exactly how you feel Rach

Excellent...i can totally relate...i'm always pretending also...i loved your poem...5/5.

Awwww...This One Is Extremely Sad...And I Relate To It ALot......Your Poems...Are Amazing..I Wish I Could Be A Great Writer Like You!...5/5 BRILLIANT! I'm always here for you if you need me! you have my email you have my msn name and you have my aim, so you can always reach me :D!
Love,
Steph*xthesetearsfalldownlikerainx*
P,s Miss talking to you :D

I can really relate to this poem!! it's written in a way that just makes you picture it! i loved it! 5/5
~*Katherine*~

Wow...excellent...i can relate so well to this...i too pretend to be something i'm not...it like i put a mask on my face at school and stuff...well...anyway...i loved your poem...5/5.

WOW. I loved that! The flow was perfect and the emotion intense. I loved it! To be it sounded a bit like verses of a song. I can imagine somebody singing it. Wonderful.

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