This poem is very good and very well written. The only thing that I did not like about it was this part:
Seeing life through her tainted heart,
Making everything gray,
Alone, her life, a new start,
Always searching for a day,
Throughout everything...
every other stanza only have 4 sentences and this have 5..I just thought that it kinda through off the flow of the poem a little bit. But other than that, it is really really good. Keep it up.