Wow!!! this is really good. it would be a great song.
keep up the amazing stuff!!
love jess xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

I really liked it, it reminds me of my boyfriend and how he is so scared to be in love yet at the same time he is so scared of losing me, amazing...keep up the great work!

This was a very well written poem. Extremley(Extremely? I'm not sure) emotional write. I was going through my comments and you wrote about my " insanely overrepeated suicidal poems, etc." you are right, they are overrepeated, sorry you don't like it. Thanks for commenting though! great write..5/5

Oh my god..wow..I love how you write, every word in all of your writing, both your poems and your quotes..its so amazingly powerful