The reason she left me

by eric   Apr 25, 2006


The permanant cancer
my heart aches from rust
the disease spreading faster
memories of you turned to dust

feels like you ripped my heart out
just threw it in the rain
everytime you would shout
you brought my heart pain

so many nights spent bleeding
scars on my wrist just bring me shame
so much time over you spent grieving
but in the end im the one to blame

i spent so much time
writing you a love poem
you were always the girl on my mind
now you wont even come home

cross my heart and hope to die
in the end you'll be the one to cry
writing about things i fear the most
remembering times when we were so close

i'll never forget that day i woke up
and you were gone
i never would have imagined
that you'd moved on

maybe you never moved on
you just ran away
because of what happend
you just couldnt stay

but please for second
imagine how hard it is for me
getting a letter in the mail
and dropping to my knees

it said you were 2 weeks pregnant
and that you were doing fine
but what hurt me the most
is when you said it wasnt mine...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lynn Anderson

    I like this poem. Its because there are so many people who have been through tough times. And you make it your reality through words. Its awesome.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~* gifted little fallen~*

    Im sorry to hear that eric, i can not say that i have been through that but my heart goes out to u.... i hope u can mend with time. it might hurt for alot of things do, and the tears that are sheed are normal, so let the pain drown out.. this is a very good write. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Great poem!! i could feel your pain through each line... and i really hope this hasn't happened to you. BUT, if it has, just remember that she couldn't see what an amazing person you are... she doesn't deserve you. some day, you'll find someone who loves you and would NEVER do that to you. never give up hope. stay strong and take care,
    -xXx-
    P.S. thanks for the comment on my poem, it means a lot!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Pain Remains

    A fantastic poem. You have a good ryhming structure and you have brought your emotions across tremendously. Get it published. A truly incredible poem.
    Jade x

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Oh wow eric -_- thats... some tough shiznat. great poem but wow... I'm so sorry *hugs* just remember heartache and death are to things your cant escape but one you can avoid and you better avoid it *shakes fist at you lol* yes thoughts are always tempting when things happen, but think of happy moments you'll miss out on, and the prefect girl that will have to setle for less cause you not around. *sorry im commenting more on your prfile then on the poem goooo me!*

    poem wise: nice ryhmes ...personally i cant do ryhmes.. EVER!

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