Life

by confuzed angel   Apr 25, 2006


I dunno if i would,
i dunno if i could,
should i pick up the knife,
the thing that will end this misery called life,
this decision is nothing noone can break,
people say just to pray and hope,
to be honest i cannot cope,
i thought i would understand,
why god put me on this land!,
I dunno if i would,
i dunno if i could,
should i pick up the knife,
the thing that will end this misery called L*I*F*E*?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jorge Luis

    Real good poem...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Angel of Poetry

    I'm definately feelin that 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by dorky goth girl

    Omg thats wicked lol it reminds me kinda like mine hahahahahaha but its wicked good

  • 18 years ago

    by NightElf

    Lil All that life Brings Are NOT bad..
    Life some times looks evel and sad
    but the things that are good comes in floods consuming that bitter tast of sorrow and pain...

    NightElf

  • 18 years ago

    by Lil Bit

    Ive felt the exact same way many of times but never get it down on paper like you did. Good Job keep it up

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