I like how you protrayed the struggle of not wanting to be alive, but not wanting to kill yourself... its interesting cos in the midst of it all there is still hope.. and maybe you are hoping for hope. I can relate and many others will be able to as well.

Really nicely written.

Sammib

That was good babe. well done. you really put it across well 5/5 keep it up. x x x

I like it.

You need to polish it up. Other than that it's fine, but it lacks rich words that let you visualize a picture behind the, um, well, self pity...
But, it wasn't TOO bad. It was fine.

//Truest Lies//

I can see how sad everything can be. We all just need someone to lean on, we'll find someone soon. ;) sad poem but food stuff. :)

I like it

Ive felt the exact same way many of times but never get it down on paper like you did. Good Job keep it up

Lil All that life Brings Are NOT bad..
Life some times looks evel and sad
but the things that are good comes in floods consuming that bitter tast of sorrow and pain...

NightElf

Omg thats wicked lol it reminds me kinda like mine hahahahahaha but its wicked good

I'm definately feelin that 5/5

Real good poem...5/5