Wellwellwell
We were always poets wernt we...I should put up the one I did...they are in some book
OMG!
That means...technically...we have been published before
Tee-heee small World

Interesting imagerary of timeless nature

Wow =) Unique subject to write about, you're a very talented writer!

It was an enjoyable read. Fantastic!

Very well done once again!

Lotsaaaaaaa love
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PS; thank you for correcting my grammar mistake =)

Some really stunning imagery here, I love the way that the poem begins almost as a close up on the bow and then pans out to the wider plains ending as a close up of the hunter with his family, gives the poem a really satisfactory sense of progression. Superb 5/5 x

Erm ummm yea.. ok poem, but I really hate hunters ......

What? is what I first said when I read this poem. I had to reread it a few times to fully grasp the meaning. Interesting style and idea... It's always good to try new things!!! Keep on writin'. : )

Wow what a unique theme. I loved the way you went so close up to the hunter ad then followed him through to his family. The imagery was like watching it on TV.