True Feelings...

by J Lau   Apr 25, 2006


Please tell me that you never had any feelings for me...
That all that happened was just the sparse of a moment,
That you were drunk and didn't know any better.
Please tell me that you were confused because you were naive...
That you didn't know I waited a year for you to be in my arms,
That I was just too sensitive and thought too much.

Your heart lead you into my arms,
And found peace and comfort when we were one.
Your guard dropped and walls crumbled down,
With the feeling of security around me.
Your mind let you speak openly to me...
We were so compatible and meant to be.

I know I will never be his replacement,
And I know I don't have as deep of a place in your heart.
I may never be the spark that you were searching for,
But can't you see how treasured you will be?
If you know that one day some girl will be the luckiest girl to have found me,
And that you believe being loved is better then to love,
Why can't it be you when we almost started?

Please don't dream and hide,
Away from your true feelings inside.
You know deep inside that I agreed to step back our relationship,
Only to save this broken heart from completely dying,
And to be always there by your side.
Feelings that are present,
Cannot be forgotten and erased.
You will always have a place in my heart,
And that is the true feeling I had for you from the start.

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    I sort of dont get..so did he cheat? srry im trying to get it but dont...mayb u can explain it to me so i can get a clear picture...but just cant rate until u explain..im so srry

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    Wow, this is really a sad poem...
    beautifully written though...
    5/5
    *isabel*

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow sometimes true feelings are the hardest ones to get down on paper because those are the ones that we hide from our peers and the rest of the world, even ourselves sometimes. But you managed to share all of these feelings very well. I liked it cause it was a love poem yet it was also kind of sad, I think that you should get rid of all of the I's and the You's and this poem would be much better.

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Wow... very passionate, I loved the topic you chose to write about, and the heartfelt aspect of it... Absolutely fabulous.

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Sweet...

    it all didnt flow right...

    but i can relate to it alot