by J Lau Apr 25, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Please tell me that you never had any feelings for me... |
I sort of dont get..so did he cheat? srry im trying to get it but dont...mayb u can explain it to me so i can get a clear picture...but just cant rate until u explain..im so srry |
by isabel
Wow, this is really a sad poem... |
Wow sometimes true feelings are the hardest ones to get down on paper because those are the ones that we hide from our peers and the rest of the world, even ourselves sometimes. But you managed to share all of these feelings very well. I liked it cause it was a love poem yet it was also kind of sad, I think that you should get rid of all of the I's and the You's and this poem would be much better. |
Wow... very passionate, I loved the topic you chose to write about, and the heartfelt aspect of it... Absolutely fabulous. |
Sweet... |