by Sole
Great poem - very sweet, but so sad, with its sense of a losing love. There were a few easy correctible mistakes, |
Really sweet poem, some parts didnt really seem to flow, but it was still really good all in all. nice work |
by Bridgette
Great job! I loved the emotion behind this poem. It like tells a sad story. It's really good. My favorite lines are: Your guard dropped and walls crumbled down, |
by Fallen Angel
Superbly written poem that shows an obvious talent. This poem clearly has such an incredible emotion behind it and this comes across very strongly, a true tale of unrequited love. I particularly liked |
Hey there, Im just leaving this to let you know, I know that I owe you four comments right now, but as of now, I have already commented on all of your poems lol. But Ill be checking back, so I promise I will give you your due comments once youve written some new poems!!! till then, take care and keep up the great work! |
by LadyPearl
Great job, you can still improve your flow |
Loved it! There was a lot of emotion in it. It was so heartfelt and sad. Very good! 5/5 |
by Jessica
Aww.. very sweet.. your emotion was really strong! it was a veryy good poem! i like it! keep it up! 5/5 |
Very sweet love poem!! The flow was a bi rocy as rach said!! But it was a very well writen love poem!! Your a fantastic writer!!5/5 |
by Synh
Not the best flow in the world but it was very swete and the emotions you put forth just amde it all the better :) |
by Fallen~Tears
Im not so sure how great the flow was but i loved the idea and thought it was very sweet |
What a romantic poem, full of emotion there were many sweet lines. Well written. |
by Natalie
Aw, That so cute. Loved the 2nd stanza. It was so good. Another awesome write. You're a great writer. 5/5 |
by Clarissa
I loved this poem, it maybe likely because i can relate to these feelings |
Really like it an easy relatable topic |
by Jackie Marie
This is a very sad love story. It is a very well written piece. I have only read 2 of your poems so far and I can already tell that you are a very good writer. :) Keep it up. |
Wow. So much emotion. You really must be passionate about this topic. =) That's a compliment by the way lol. Great write. =) 5/5 xoxo |
Again I found it hard to follow... You aren't using any type of flow to your poems which just kills the message... |
Hey, wow you just decribed the feelings of so many people, so well. Amazing poem, Love |
by SCARECROW
Ah, more brilliance. Well done, indeed! *claps* 5 from me. |