Haunting and unforgetting memories...

by Roxy   Apr 25, 2006


Dad can you hear me.
I'm crying aloud.
The tears that are in my eyes,
can no longer be found.
My body is awakening,
rising from the dead.
My spirit haunts this house,
I did something i regret.
I feel in love with a knife,
Indeed it feel in love with me.
The blade scared my hands,
With unforgotten memories.
Now i lay here crying,
With broken horrid wings.
Waiting to be forgiven,
For i had dome very bad sins!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Morgan

    This poem is simply AMAZING!! talk to you later

  • 17 years ago

    by Birgit

    Very strong...and I really liked this part =]:
    I'm crying aloud.
    The tears that are in my eyes,
    can no longer be found.

    Just one thing..is it supossed to be: I feel in love with a knife.. or I fell in love with a knife? 'Cause I think I fell in love with a knife sounds better.. ;] Just an idea.

    Keep smiling.
    5/5
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxii

    Wow! now thats deep! awesome writing! its really descriptive. i can almost feel the emotions running through me! great job! i think your writing is way above mine. i hope that i can be a better writer and be at your level! =D
    Roxii

  • 17 years ago

    by Shriya

    Wow i can't believe it u r soo goood !¬!! /i can't believe it ??
    u know i have to writ an exclaming comment WOW !! AMAZING !! SPECTACULAR !!!!!!
    i can't explain it . anyway lovely poem hun and cum up soon
    ur bessie shriyaxoxoxoxoxxo

  • 18 years ago

    by mane

    Really different

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