Really different

Wow i can't believe it u r soo goood !¬!! /i can't believe it ??
u know i have to writ an exclaming comment WOW !! AMAZING !! SPECTACULAR !!!!!!
i can't explain it . anyway lovely poem hun and cum up soon
ur bessie shriyaxoxoxoxoxxo

Wow! now thats deep! awesome writing! its really descriptive. i can almost feel the emotions running through me! great job! i think your writing is way above mine. i hope that i can be a better writer and be at your level! =D
Roxii

Very strong...and I really liked this part =]:
I'm crying aloud.
The tears that are in my eyes,
can no longer be found.

Just one thing..is it supossed to be: I feel in love with a knife.. or I fell in love with a knife? 'Cause I think I fell in love with a knife sounds better.. ;] Just an idea.

Keep smiling.
5/5
xxx

This poem is simply AMAZING!! talk to you later